Sunday, December 12, 2010

Blog #7: Compare and Contrast


a)
If i were to write an essay about these two pictures my purpose would be to show how desperate the people in Africa need assistance and to show the distinction between the two ways of life.

b)
Although both the African and American children are alive, only the American child is living because while the African child's heart is still beating faintly he is suffering everyday of starvation and if he wants to look forward to the future needs help now.

c)
I would organize this essay in a point by point format to emphasize the differences between the African child and the American child.

"Blog #6: Working Defenitions"

Term:Art

Definition by Negation: The term art has many different meanings in our society. Art is not trash, or something that does not have any meaning in it.

Definition by History: Art an also be connected to the man Picasso because he was one of the most famous painters in the 19th century known for his abstract art

Definition by Example: Art can be anything because everyone has their own definition of the word art. Art for mathematicians could be a math problem, art for a painter could a painting

Definition by compare and contrast: Art can also be compared to an expression of a persons emotions because that is what art basically is, emotions in physical form.

"Blog #5 Narrative & Description Response"


I woke up this morning and I realized that today was the day of the big cross country race at the beach. We were going to go against Mar Vista and so far in the season they were undefeated. As I got ready to go to the race i couldn't help but notice the clouds outside, but i knew that rain or shine Castle Park was going to go against Mar Vista and that this race would be the decisive one in the season, for whoever lost this race would lose the chance to be called league champions.

As i got off the school bus i and went to the canape coach put up earlier i noticed the other team getting off their bus as well. I was so nervous because they were all really tall and lean. Coach then told the team not to worry about the other team and to just "run your race". Since i was captain of the team it was my responsibility to get everyone ready for the race. So, i told the team to go to the bathroom and to be back in a couple of minutes because the coach had a little strategy for us to run when the race started.

After the whole team finished going to the bathroom coach told us the strategy we were going to run and how to run it. The strategy was basically,"run as a group at a certain pace and let Mar Vista runners start falling off one by one and just hold on to the pace until the finish." This strategy was one that i really loathed because when we run as a team and i get weary, uncomfortable and i get tired faster but as captain i had to suck it up and do it for the team. As coach told us to warm up and stretch it started sprinkling and i knew then that we would have to run in the rain.

As we finished warming up and stretching we took off our sweats and put on our uniforms, which consisted of a tank top shirt and really short shorts, and right then we got a full blast of the wind and rain. It was like taking an ice cold shower. The seven varsity runners then went to the starting line so we could begin the race. Already waiting at the starting line was the top seven varsity of Mar Vista ready to go. Next thing i knew the official had already shot the gun and the race was on.

The Mar Vista v.s Castle Park cross country race was one i will never forget because it was in that race that we won by a point in the overall score.Once the race started it felt like the rain and wind was pushing you down. Me and my team were all very excited and tired after the race because now that we beat Mar Vista there were only a few other schools standing in our way to become the South Bay League Champions.

Tuesday, August 3, 2010

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When I was finished writing my two short Narratives ''In Cold Blood'' and ''Breakfast at Tiffanys'' I wanted to host a black and white ball. I had a talent for weaving truth and fiction and I lost most of my friends this way. When my friends left me I started drinking a lot and using drugs and I became more of a recluse and I had stopped writing for quite a while.''Answered Prayers'' was my last bit of me that I left behind. In this story I offended most of my friends, August, 25, 1984 was the day I died but my legacy will continue to live on through my books.